This week our class have been writing stories which is in past tense. My story is about a tuna's life. I really like making this story and I hope you enjoy. Next time I would make it more interesting.
🐟Life Of A Tuna🐟
Day 1: I swam around my coral and looked at the other tunas because I was all alone and I wanted some friends. I was too scared to talk to other tunas so I just stayed in my coral.
Day 2: I swam to the other tunas and talked to them so they can be my friends but they rejected me and I swam away.
Day 3: I felt hungry and I got some food by hunting for my prey but a sudden splash appeared in the water and all the tunas were panicking. Some of the tuna tried to swim away and others tried to hide but the beast was too smart and found most of the tuna.
Day 4: I was all alone and witnessed the death of the other tunas. The beast was still roaming around for other fishes and saw me swam away from the danger so it tried to capture me but I was too fast for it so it fell behind.
Day 5: The beast was still trying to capture me with all sorts of weapons. I was starting to get tired so I found a place to sleep and hide.
Day 6: I was looking for food for breakfast and when I saw food, I rushed to get it because I was so hungry. A large object popped up and it was the beast, I was scared so I swam away but it was too late and I got captured.
Day 7: The beast and I were on a boat headed to a city, the beast took off it’s diving helmet and it was a human. He dragged the fishing net full of fishes next to the grinder and when he was ready he tossed the tunas into the grinder one by one. He placed me in a cold place and I heard him talking to someone “ Hey, want to eat this tuna for dinner tomorrow” the other person nodded.
Day 8: The human was getting prepared for dinner and the other one was putting the tunas in the grinder. He was still putting the tunas in the grinder but when he was finish he got the grinned tunas and placed it in a can. It was finally time for dinner, the human placed me in hot water to defrost me and then they putted me in the oven. I raised up to Heaven and when I was still rising I saw the humans eating my dead body.
Hi Lance my name is Alex and I am a Year 6 student from St. Bernadette's School. I really like your story! I liked your story because it was funny and creative. You also did a great job at writing this story in past tense. Next time maybe you could write why you liked writing this story. I look forward to seeing more stories from you Lance.
ReplyDeleteThank you Alex for the great comment and I will make sure that I make more stories like this.
DeleteHi Lance, I'm Dion I really like this story because it was very funny and exciting. I particularly liked the describing words you used. What made you think about writing a story about a tuna? I will be looking forward to your next blog post.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the great comment man and the reason I wrote a story about a tuna is because I was hungry.
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