For writing we were given a task to make an image to fill a Blank Canvas and write two paragraph that has a complex and compound sentence. My image was inspired by and alien invasion but I turned it into a robot invasion.
What I Found Hard: thinking what to write about.
What I Found Easy: making the image.
What I could Do Next Time: is make a better image.
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Robotš¤Invasion
In a stormy day a mad scientist was trying to create the most helpful robot in the world and when he finished he made more and sold it to the world. People are saying “in the future robots will take over the world and destroy the human race”. Humans are creating robots to make their lives easier and they can do all the work that needs to be done. Soon the world is filled with robots and more and more plant lives will be gone, so there’ll be less oxygen for us to breathe. The purpose of a robot is to do all the work for the humans but one robot had enough and tried to reprogram its circuit board.
The evil robot reprogram all the other robots and headed for New York. The robots walked on the Brooklyn Bridge like an army, the citizens ran for their lives but some stayed and fight for their city. They all started to fight one another but there can only be one winner and the winner is the robots. One person was still alive so he hid away and tried to heal the people that was still alive. When they were ready they waited to ambush the robots in their lair. The timing was perfect so they attacked and went for the leader but there was too many guards. They didn’t give up and they won against the robots so there’s peace once again in the world.
Tena koe, Lance your blog post knocked me out of the water, especially your amazing image you created, you have laid it out so well and chosen really good colours. I really enjoyed your writing and the use of some really cool "wow" words like "destroy" and "ambush". Next time you could use Google Read Write to read your story out loud so you can work out if you have correct punctuation like using commas in your sentences. Where did this idea for your story come from?
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