In school we're doing our inquires, here's mine right now, I'm learning about homeless kids in the Philippines.
What I Found Hard: finding the information that I wanted
What I Found Easy: making the Emaze
What I Could Do Next Time: make it look better
Hi Lance,
ReplyDeleteI really love your presentation on the children in the Philippines. It's so sad that the have to wander to many places to find a comfy place to sleep. Looking from the rubric point of view, I feel like some of your facts could've used some strong back up information. For example, when talking about the children with no home, you could possibly add the amount of kids with no home along with the amount kids with no homes increasing, to make the viewers more concerned. Other than that, I really enjoyed the presentation keep up the good work!
Hi Lance,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your inquire about homeless children in the Philippines. I've learnt a lot from your inquire about the children in the Philippines. But maybe next time you could add a little more detail to support your information.