Freda’s Flashback
It was burning and I’m crawling in mud, terrified of getting shot. There were gunshots everywhere ears started ringing. It was like my ears were exploding. But I was with my best friend Sam, I saw people dying right in front of me. Booming sounds were killing my ears and scorching fires were in the middle of the battlefield. When the war was over Sam and I went back to Lucy.
Based on "The Anzac Puppy" By Peter Millett and Trish Bowles
W.A.L.T write a flashback from a different perspective and use show not tell.
Based on "The Anzac Puppy" By Peter Millett and Trish Bowles
W.A.L.T write a flashback from a different perspective and use show not tell.
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