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Monday, 20 March 2017

Goldilocks

Goldilocks
Once there was a little girl named Goldilocks she doesn't like taking baths so she sinks a lot. When she ran away from her house she went to the three bear’s house and she sore some porridge and she ate a spoonful of porridge but when it got in her mouth it was so hot that she grabbed her tongue and yelled and some birds flew away.
The three bears herd Goldilocks yell and they ran away, a few moments later the three bears came back and Goldilocks was sleeping in a bed. The three bears gave her a bath and threw her out and said, “DON’T COME BACK”.
When Goldilocks ran away she sat down and thought about what she did and felt bad. She went back and said sorry.

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  1. Anonymous20 March 2017 at 10:58

    Hi Lance!
    Your story is really cool. I liked how you made your story short but enough for us to read. Maybe next time you could proof read your story so that you could check your spelling and add a cool title. Anyway cool story, Lance!

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